Rewrite about my opinion

Government must make an effort about economic recovery because there are many people who lost their job and are out of work. In fact there are many people who are canceled unofficial decision from company among many parts of Japan. And there are many people who are dismissed by company then become homeless. For example temporary staff and a person who not get marriage. I worry about whether I can find a job. I asked three people. They agree with me. Everyone worry about it. Government should readjust business and reduce people who have not job. There are people who sink down in despair. If government do not try improvement about this serious problem, Japanese society become economy collapse .For example social balance will crumble and there will be a gap in society between rich and poor. But if government make an effort about economic recovery, things are humming inJapan.